Cyber Smart-Improving Comments.

Today We had Cyber smart with Mr. V and we learnt how to write a proper comment. He taught us to use the "P.T.H" which stands for , Positive , Thoughtful and Helpful. To break this down , In a blog comment you have to include what you liked about his/her blog post and then include a piece of advice you think they could do better next time. Then end the comment with something helpful . My task was to find someone else's blog comment and improve it in a way. So I found a comment that had just said "Cool I love it" this is necessarily not a good comment because it doesn't say who it is and what the author could do better next time. So here's my work on how I improved it....